Excellent. Your essay shows a great deal of care that you took in its revision. it seems much improved from your first draft, which was already very good. You have clearly and specifically described several different forces that led to /promoted silent reading, and you have also discussed some obstacles to silent reading. Your use of sources is excellent: I take note of the fact that you used six sources although you were only required to cite two. I don't think I passed out the Jared Diamond chapter, though I might have mentioned it sometime along the way. This is a good outside source for your essay. Your clarity of expression is particularly noticeable: your prose style suggests clarity of thought and a strong command of written language. This essay is very thoroughly researched and carefully written. Grade: A+
Excellent. Your essay shows a great deal of care that you took in its revision. it seems much improved from your first draft, which was already very good. You have clearly and specifically described several different forces that led to /promoted silent reading, and you have also discussed some obstacles to silent reading. Your use of sources is excellent: I take note of the fact that you used six sources although you were only required to cite two. I don't think I passed out the Jared Diamond chapter, though I might have mentioned it sometime along the way. This is a good outside source for your essay. Your clarity of expression is particularly noticeable: your prose style suggests clarity of thought and a strong command of written language. This essay is very thoroughly researched and carefully written. Grade: A+
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