You have written a terrific essay, but you need to cite ALL the sources mentioned in the essay. This is a major omission. The Orlando Patterson reference is particularly good but you need to cite it. Clearly, you have done your research well and you understand the controversy swirling around this concept. Your essay is quite well written in all respects, with the exception noted above. Grade: A- If you want to cite all sources and resubmit the essay for an A, you may, but I would like to receive that resubmission within one week and no later.
You have written a terrific essay, but you need to cite ALL the sources mentioned in the essay. This is a major omission. The Orlando Patterson reference is particularly good but you need to cite it.
ReplyDeleteClearly, you have done your research well and you understand the controversy swirling around this concept. Your essay is quite well written in all respects, with the exception noted above.
Grade: A-
If you want to cite all sources and resubmit the essay for an A, you may, but I would like to receive that resubmission within one week and no later.